Simply put, my writing has been suffering since losing so much of the book, and as I have been unable to write much in the way of the actual storyline, the best place to see the change is in the short stories.
For example the short story
Of Sheets, when I planned it out it was supposed to take place right before Valerie's rise, and was supposed to be an exercise in writing something intimate since Artemis and Kamen seem to dart around it CONSTANTLY, but the reader gets from the context that there's something going on in the Haven.
My plan sort of back fired, they're talking, Kamen voices his own disapproval of the current state of politics, and, per usual, they begin to bicker:
( The Feud: )
Now from here my plan was to turn it around and start working on things you never actually see in the book, BUT it quickly plummets, and next thing I know Artemis is going into crazy/depressed mode and I just feel awful for Kamen:
( Then it sort of falls off... )The line about sunflowers and then the one about ambrosia kills me a little inside.
But there you have it, my writing is suffering and so I've started
the Ritzko Project in an attempt to work back up to it. So far it's working, I at least feel up to writing, and I even opened up
Artemis after a session with
Ritzko because I felt better about it. I'm pretty sure
Artemis is cursed in some way or other, but I don't plan on giving up on it any time soon.
Speaking of misfortune with
Artemis, one of my main editors (I think actually my only editor on the project at this point) lost use of her computer. Basically it died in a great display of fire, ash, lightning, and divine retribution--without the fire, ash, lightning, and divine retribution. I've been trying to work with her to get her computer back on track, but I'm failing quickly. I didn't even realize until she said it that she had lost all the editing she had done on it. It was weird, it didn't even hurt. I think I'm numb on that front