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Funny story...
Mar. 21st, 2011 07:44 pmSitting, writing Artemis, once again struggling with the content, and then another idea for a book pops in my head...and I could push it out in 10 days.
Anywho, something I noticed with Artemis, and it comes from this small excerpt:
Kamen stopped mid-bite on the dumpling and then shrugged, "Where do you get chocolate like that?"
Rei glared at him, "A gift from Alladair Udit."
Kamen swallowed slowly, "Send him my regards."
WTF is Alladair Udit doing sending Rei chocolates? Especially liquor filled cherry cordials? Anyone who missed that part of the book where they explained that Udit was Sargasso's FATHER wouldn't get much out of this. It was honest to god a random character that I picked, one that had been visited briefly in the story, but I wasn't planning on getting to much into them personally.
So here's the wierd bit. Udit is sending chocolates to the leader of his daughter-in-law's fanclub. And they're full of booze. I don't know if it's just a cute gesture, or if its meant as "LOL CRY MOAR NEWB".
Anywho, something I noticed with Artemis, and it comes from this small excerpt:
Kamen stopped mid-bite on the dumpling and then shrugged, "Where do you get chocolate like that?"
Rei glared at him, "A gift from Alladair Udit."
Kamen swallowed slowly, "Send him my regards."
WTF is Alladair Udit doing sending Rei chocolates? Especially liquor filled cherry cordials? Anyone who missed that part of the book where they explained that Udit was Sargasso's FATHER wouldn't get much out of this. It was honest to god a random character that I picked, one that had been visited briefly in the story, but I wasn't planning on getting to much into them personally.
So here's the wierd bit. Udit is sending chocolates to the leader of his daughter-in-law's fanclub. And they're full of booze. I don't know if it's just a cute gesture, or if its meant as "LOL CRY MOAR NEWB".
